All Comments on 'Nikki - Birth of a Slut'

by Bimboemmalee

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

An easy and good start, but with the bet the progression was speeding up way too fast. Out off the blue a big muscle drug daddy appeared and in my opinion it was no longer a caring loving smut story. You lost me there... but you are talented!

sissyjolie4usissyjolie4ualmost 2 years ago

What a great start sis, can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow! Amazing story and I can't wait to hear more. I so want to be Nikki!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A great first story, really looking forward to new stories!

robertw61robertw61almost 2 years ago

very good love see more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a great story of having a t-girl as a best friend with benefits what more can on ask for. It could be leading into a sissy love story by the way it ended. Not a fan of the Dewayne element, though others might enjoy it. I can see Jess ordering a regime of Forced Feminization pills and creams to further Nikki along the transformation. Is there going to be additional chapters? 5 Stars for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A really great story. I would love to find my "Jess'. Sadly, I had to read parts of it several times to figure out what was going on because of really poor sentence structure, misspellings lack of proper punctuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic job on your first story. You might need a proofreading next time. It's wonderful.

KirabangkokKirabangkokalmost 2 years ago

I like this, only criticism I have is darn it, there is only this chapter lol. But really, this is a good story, nice start with a good storyline. Looking forward to your work Hon. And " sigh " too old to be Nicole, but a bitch can dream lol :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like most of it, don’t care for the mind altering drugs. Also, if a female Physician Assistant with average size hands for a female can check a man’s prostate it doesn’t take an extremely long cock to reach it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great beginning. I can’t wait to see what’s next.

AlucardCGNAlucardCGNalmost 2 years ago

Ich freue jetzt schon auf die Fortsetzung

hindsight2020hindsight2020almost 2 years ago

It was a great story until the betrayal and abuse started.

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Just another hopeful sissy, just started writing, thank you for enjoying my smut I'm usually dripping through my cage into my panties while I write it and I hope you are too.

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