by Bimboemmalee
An easy and good start, but with the bet the progression was speeding up way too fast. Out off the blue a big muscle drug daddy appeared and in my opinion it was no longer a caring loving smut story. You lost me there... but you are talented!
What a great story of having a t-girl as a best friend with benefits what more can on ask for. It could be leading into a sissy love story by the way it ended. Not a fan of the Dewayne element, though others might enjoy it. I can see Jess ordering a regime of Forced Feminization pills and creams to further Nikki along the transformation. Is there going to be additional chapters? 5 Stars for sure.
A really great story. I would love to find my "Jess'. Sadly, I had to read parts of it several times to figure out what was going on because of really poor sentence structure, misspellings lack of proper punctuation.
Fantastic job on your first story. You might need a proofreading next time. It's wonderful.
I like this, only criticism I have is darn it, there is only this chapter lol. But really, this is a good story, nice start with a good storyline. Looking forward to your work Hon. And " sigh " too old to be Nicole, but a bitch can dream lol :-)
I like most of it, don’t care for the mind altering drugs. Also, if a female Physician Assistant with average size hands for a female can check a man’s prostate it doesn’t take an extremely long cock to reach it.