Nine Wonderful Women Ch. 09

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I hope you enjoyed reading about my memories, and if you did, please give me a star, leave me a comment or send me a private message. Best wishes, love and peace to you all!

"Andy"

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Crawfc323Crawfc323about 2 years ago

Rare that I find a series, story or author and go wow. This was it. An excellent thread and so sad it came to its natural end.

tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 2 years ago

Andy, strong work on this series. The sex scenes were graphic and hot. I liked your internal dialogue as you worked out the kinks of each relationship. I agree with Peter_Cleveland, you've got plenty of raw material and the writing chops to write erotic fiction. Give it a try. 5*

AndyAndrewsAndyAndrewsover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Peter,

I highly admire your writing, so your kind comments mean a lot to me. I had started this project with the only intention to share my stories, which I’ve done. But I have received such encouragement from the readers and I have enjoyed the writing so much, that I am considering continuing. I like your idea of blending fact with fiction, and I appreciate your particular suggestion. I will come back to this in early 2022, write a story or two, and see if I feel they are worth publishing. Best regards, Andy.

Peter_ClevelandPeter_Clevelandover 2 years ago

I had already read Chapter 1. Tonight I skipped over chapters 2-7 (I'll get them later) in order to catch the latest, hot off the press. As instructed, I read #8 before #9.

This pair of chapters was sweet, very realistic and plausible, and very poignant. I was sorry to see Lindy and the narrator break up. On the other hand, the breakup seemed natural and inevitable. Very nicely done here.

I hope this isn't the end of your writing career! If you've run out of true stories, how about re-arranging some key details from your experience and trying some fiction? For example: The ex-wife has sole custody of the teenaged daughter. The Ex wants to re-unite. The hero has to choose between his sexy new lover and his Ex-plus-daughter (??). Just off the top of my head....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
wonderful

Nine wonderful chapters in a wonderful story! Too bad it wasn't longer!

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