All Comments on 'Nineteen Pt. 01'

You have grammar errors in almost every sentence. It was impossible to read.

Good day Sir/Miss, with respect i doubt it impossible to read, otherwise it would not have been published. I am not a student of the English language i just do my best to write a good story, be it true or a fictional story based on fact and fantasy. Please try again or maybe delete me from your reading list. sara xx

Anonymous, comments like that are not really helpful. I help sara with proof reading and although I don't profess to be completely proficient in English grammar it does not seem that bad to me and it is certainly readable. Rather than being completely negative some examples of what you are talking about would help us improve and make it more enjoyable for you. What do others think?

Thank you Sir