by UpstairsInterest
Nice shorty story. Really well written. I wish I could write like you.
Please keep writing.
What a well written story. I could easily visualize myself as a full participant in the whole story.
The writer skilfully led us through the experience without rushing or over emphasizing the role of either party.
I could feel the sexual tensions of both of them.
I ALMOST FEEL THAT I WAS THERE PARTICIPATING IN PERSON.