All Comments on 'No-LIMIT-Rooms 05 English'

Outstanding writing. Please continue, in English.

Unfortunately, there is a problem with part 6, as it was rejected by the admin team for alleged policy violations. I am working on a solution.

I do not want to trivialize violence in my story, nor do I want to use pure sadism as a stylistic device for pleasure. It is a thriller that describes realistically existing conditions. I doubt that all porn actors do their job for pleasure, especially in the hard BDSM area. It is possible that a novel that also describes unpleasant realities is not optimally placed on an erotic site, but for 'normal people' it is again much too special as a thriller and with too much sex.

It is possible that I will have to rewrite passages.

Since I'm writing at the same time on the sequel No-LIMIT-Rooms Nadine, and still the outtake "Kumiho Na-Ri - Demoness of the Wind' in German, this can unfortunately take time.

If you don't want to wait, you can find the still missing parts 6 and 7 in German at the moment. I recommend the Deepl translator, which gets reasonably good readable translations.

Great story! You're a very talented writer. Looking forward to read the sequel.