All Comments on 'No Longer a Show Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sorry, this is not a bit realistic

Gary went from an ultra-straight obnoxious homophobic jerk in Ch 1 to now not only a guy who’s open to camming for guys, but also immediately invites a local gay guy to his home to fuck, defaults as a bottom, willingly with no thought or debate sucks his first cock, gets fucked in the ass (with no prepping or lubing), experiences little if any pain from the first big dick he’s taking, laps up a mix of both cums, and then fantasizes about being this dude’s bitch every day from then on?! WTF. Would never happen. Try slowing it down a bit and easing along a natural progression of him trying gay stuff so that it’s remotely believable.

69stroker6969stroker69over 3 years ago

Looking to hear more from Danny

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just stop.

Your writing is just terrible. Terrible.

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