No Tell Motel - Peeling the Onion

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"You have my blessing and support kiddo. Whatever you need just tell your dad. This time next year I want us to be in every run down motel from here to Miami. Now for the important shit. You've got to come over to my office cause really my email is so fucked up it can't keep anything straight. But first its time for my afternoon nap"

The room quickly cleared out except for III and his uncle Vito.

"So kid I'm really proud of how you built all this up. It's going to be a big success."

"Thanks Vito, coming from you I appreciate it but I have to tell you one thing."

"What's that kid?"

"Your new 'friend' that I saw you with at the club on Saturday. I wouldn't get too friendly with her. Cherie's name is really Gretchen. She's married with two kids and a husband. More importantly she is a deep undercover agent for the FBI."

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InfosaugerInfosaugerabout 1 year ago

I would like to know what happened to the cheating couple at the beginning of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Extremely scary vision that is not science fiction anymore. Entertaining. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A well tried business plan.

Works for Google, Facebook and the like.

The Chinese government is big on this as well.

Walk down a city street and all that crap is in play today.

The information age won't end well for most.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

That’s a good well thought out story, as much as the tech is in existence now, and it’s possible to do, it wouldn’t happen, but as a story it’s great,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not bad . I don’t understand how comments are how the sell the videos. It’s a story people , fiction either enjoy it as a story or not but stop try to figure out the hows

onlythelonelyloveonlythelonelyloveabout 1 year ago

It doesn’t make sense to sell the porn rights for the room. Or to mindlessly blackmail people. Word would get out and the place where real money is made-actionable intelligence would be lost. Reputation matters and someone would blow cover. The police would get involved and the hotel would be raided, etc. the issue is to make money and not get greedy… why? E abuse the video would show the room. The camera angles would tip anyone off as to the set-up…

EastCoaster1EastCoaster1about 1 year ago

There's an old saw that coukd apply here, saying "just because I'm paranoid, it DOESN'T mean they're not out to get me !"

This is a very well done and light-hearted treatment of something not only possible, but probable in today's techno society...

...a similar topic has been raised many times with folks using it to pander to their own sense of paranoia, or their immersion into various conspiracy theorists, usually around a governmental Big Brother.

This tale shows a darker version of intelligence gathering, topped off by a great ending !

5 stars for a well-done, and possibly cautionary, tale of darker uses of new technology.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I don't understand how they sell cheating video's to the betrayed spouses, especially with the notorious examples of real life fake videos now commonly seen. Why would a spouse even respond to such an offer unless they already had suspicions, and how would they be convinced that the video was real? And once the spouse watches a video of their mate cheating what do they need with the video in a no-fault divorce state?

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And how long before it becomes common knowledge that the motels are recording the customers in their rooms? With all the outed customers, the maintenance and room service staff gossiping and complaining it wouldn't be a secret for more than a few weeks, months if they were lucky.

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Yeah, what happened to the cheating assholes would be an interesting read. The phony business plan for a mob family was just boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Clever.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

That was interesting. I don’t like cheaters, so maybe the mob will get them.

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