by Nokkas
LW is suppose to be a JO category. Why in the fuck are you here?
If he can 2x the paragraphs, and the story can get me off, I'll give him a higher star mark.
Sounds like win-win to me, you dried-up cunt.
just can read short paragraphs, so he can jerk off in his mother's basement. With long or short paragraphs this will always be pure shit!
You need 2 - 3x the number of paragraphs.