by Pippa76
*****This storyline reminds me of the sex paperback books from back in the day. HOT READ!!! Thanks for sharing.
Oh my lord felt like I was in the room watching you, there’s nothing wrong with your writing skills.you’ve got us hooked
These four stories are excellent. They never drag, and you put us right there with you. When I was younger and had little money, I too lived in housing with "noisy neighbors." It's somehow a thrill to hear the moans and groans from next door. All the more so, because it's not as though you're sneaking a look, or something; the noise is just there, coming through the wall. Of course, correct behavior would be to go to another room, however in my case, living in a studio apartment, there was no other room! It was also fun to see the woman who was making the noise the next day, but that only happened once. 5*~~JB
Ditto to my previous comments. Your writing is so good as you are creating the continuing story that drags us along with you. I feel I'm in the room with you....perhaps giving the voice in your head someone to answer your questions.
I love too masturbate. I have cum so hard from mastubating that more than once I have gotten cum all over my face
This narrative is very well written and very erotic. One of the best! 5 stars and thanks for sharing.
Really enjoying this! Each chapter is a delight. I'm going to save Ch4 for a moment when I have time to sit back and really enjoy it. Notes on this one for now: I like the short paragraphs, they keep things moving. I like the relationship with Kate, nicely sketched in a few well chosen works. I absolutely love the description of the wet knickers at the beginning - so real, such a turn on. And the way you build up the tension remains excellent. Phrases like "Excitement fills me once more, like venom from a bite" really do the work. And the final depiction of the narrator on all fours, giddy with her gushing orgasm is excellent.
You have a lovely style and really me the reader feel as if they are with you.
Wonderful description of you teasing and pleasuring your body as you listen to founds of love making coming from your next door neighbour. We now know that these episodes triggered an itch in your body that needed scratching with a younger lover of your own.