by albright
This is fascinating.your writing is crisp and moves the story forward. The relationship between Nora and James is almost like a busness partnership. Nora seems selfish. She takes, but what does she give James that feeds his soul? Where is the deep and abiding love shared between them? James is right in his response to Nora. She has a lot to consider because if she puts her lust ahead of the foundational love she should have with James, then she will doom their marriage and bring a lot of pain for both.
This is a solid piece that can serve as a springboard. I'm a fan. Well done indeed.
All the best,
Dave
As if the big black clown wasn’t low enough, the cuck sets the whore up with a lawyer. That’s just too low.