All Comments on 'Normal as She Desires Ch. 03'

Clothing doesn’t just shield our bodies from societal mores, it protects us from the elements, helps regulate heat and offers protection from germs and bacteria.

Who wants to sit their naked ass on a cushion that had just been shoved up someone’s ass whose hygiene may not be 100%?

Good points, some of which will be addressed (or rather, excused) offhand in the next [half] chapter. As for others, some of which I will use the cop out of "it's a erotic story, a lot of that logistics tend to be handwaved by default".

That being said, I think many of us do vastly underestimate how much filth that the average person will tolerate, and how much leeway the average body has as far as dealing with biological hazards. Then again, I also realize that the average American consumes way too much medication on the daily just because (but how often does anyone see that gets mentioned in the average erotica? It's basically one of those things that's unsaid and handwaved. Also this place is probably not the best place to rant about prescription drug dependency on the societal level). And then, the average erotica characters are by default way healthier and in shape than the average person, as it is a hardbaked fantasy element.

I'm really liking this series so far. I find the inner monologue of the protag really well made and it elevates the quality of the story to superb imho. I hope part 4 will be up soon.

I don't want to sound like a dick but I'm gonna be pretty much AFK for the rest of the year due to some RL things going on. Sure, I have known about those things for a few months but I'm also not exactly that good at long term planning.

That being said, yes, next part is being worked on (slowly).

This is such a cool concept and your writing is doing it justice. I imagine you would start to doubt your world view and might even believe you are in a simulation or something if this happens. I hope the future holds a investigation by the protagonist into the cause.

I can't wait to see where you take this story.

This is getting delightfully bent. Looking forward to the next part, whenever your circumstances allow you to get back to it.

Re. the hygiene aspect: speaking from experience, in the real-life nudist community, one is expected to carry around a towel to sit on, to protect one's bits from shared surfaces, and (more important etiquette-wise) vice versa. If Sara were to add a rule like that to the HR policies & procedures, there would be no handwaving necessary :-)

Echoing the positive comments regarding the creative idea behind this story and the quality of your writing in getting it on the site so it can be read, it's not so important that your chapters keep coming at warp speed, they simply need to keep coming. The story is already delightfully warped!

Kudos on everything you've done; and, since it is now mid-January of 2023--well past "the rest of the year" that you needed to be AFK--we can all look forward to more of your imaginative ideas.

I can't wait, so MORE PLEASE!

MLJ