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by TheJohnsonator05

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hotlead1hotlead1about 9 years ago
Not bad at all...

The story was on the brief side and I wish it had been more fully developed. Nevertheless, it was an upgrade over the past few efforts and shows promise. I still think your earlier efforts were much better. They were longer and had a more developed story with several scenes.

I realize time is scare, but keep up the good work and always look to improve.

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It has been a long time since I last updated this. Since then I have done a lot of writing with no intent to submit, at least not yet. I have dug up some old ideas that I have long forgotten. One of them is a prequel of sorts to both Competition Cups and North Valley High. It'...

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