All Comments on 'Not Guilty'
by Harddaysknight
- 810 Comments (Page 9)
Imshakenabout 1 month agoLighthearted almost keystone cops and a very clever story! Thank you for sharing your creation!
cutedaddy69about 1 month agoNice perspective. You write many great stories and, to my taste, some times an average one. This one is definitely among the kinds where your strength lies! Tx
DeanofMeanabout 1 month agoSome say life is a bitch, I don't believe that. Life is a sweet one but her stripper name is KARMA bitch. Well done an almost perfect revenge story
Anonymous30 days agoHoly moly! Ic69hunter likes a story that doesn’t involve a cum slurping cuckold.
Southdown20 days agoA bit messy and jumbled at times, but well pulled together in the end. You need to be simpler and not try to'jam in' all the information you want to convey at one time This was a fun read but could have been a 5***** epic with a little editing or 'tidying up' Thank You I love twisted plots and interconnecting stories but they have to be clear and well punctuated. take a little time and get a read-through before you publish,,,, Well Done good story!
Captain_Karma16 days agoWell done! I love these Detective Cook stories. I hope you get offers from Hollywood.we need more detective comedies. All of your work is fantastic! Thanks
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