All Comments on 'Not Our Wedding Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wrong tag

MattBsb500MattBsb500about 3 years ago

I think it's a good enough story. like her turn on by her own juices is hot, but why is it in the Anal category no one touches or mentions it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Reasonable premise.

But it's in the ANAL category? Whar's that about? No anal sex at all.

She wants him to go down on her? So that's where that ends? He doesn't. She doesn't ask.

She can't rub her VAGINA on his bulge. The vagina is all internal. She could rub he PUSSY on his bulge.

Sex happened much too fast. They're alone. She's on his lap. Boom he kisser her. Boom he fingers her. Boom he fucks her.

Sex? Yes. Erotic? Not the least bit.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Anal? Did I miss it? Story was very rushed. Co.plete waste of time to read

0 stars

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