All Comments on 'Now That's a Surprise'

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AxelottoAxelottoalmost 7 years ago

I gave it 4 stars. Its well written, while I felt it was short I don't see how you could lengthen it. You captured the moment.

I didn't like it, but that's me not liking the situation, not your fault at all.

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