All Comments on 'Nude Day with Daddy'

by ArdentHemingway

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chad132chad13210 months ago

This is so great and I hope I have a fun time with my new young girl friend

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

So well written that, like Apricot, I didn’t want it to end. Well edited too. The images are hot in my mind: her eyes, her face, her hair, her breasts and nipples, her apricot-shaped bald pussy and that butt. A brilliant creation and the things she willingly had done to her. Wonderful writing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Would love another story with these characters... so many possibilities of where it could go!!

Five Stars!!!

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