by luv2custrip
Had some potential, but jumps around too much and is spoiled by so much non-consent (another category) and cursing.
At one point in the past, I could claim to be somewhat a minor authority on "utopian fiction"--so Marianne's office seemed right up my alley. This story is great fun, and very sexy; and the female narrator, Katelyn, has an engaging verbal style and personality. The story was creative throughout. Possibly, in the second half, the story might cover too much new ground a little too quickly. Much as I enjoyed the poolside incest, that (and Katelyn's engagement) might have worked even better in a second chapter. Even so, I thought the story clearly rated five stars.
While reading the story, I must have blinked a few times, as I missed the non-consent and cursing of which another reader complains.
I wish I could live in this world. However, much like a nudist resort, I would expect that the excitement would eventually wear off and people would just get used to it. I can't see me acting like those in this story. But I would like to try it ;-)