Number 24 Pt. 02

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"You'll need to gag me again," she allowed, voice tight. "I can't trust that I won't make a sound."

Hope could not bear to look, so kept her eyes closed, opening her mouth wide instead. She thought she heard a small groan from above her, but quickly dismissed it as the sound of the canvas bag shifting. In a moment, she felt something press into her mouth, then more and more of it until she was almost choking, her jaws straining, her cheeks bulging. She opened her eyes as Myles said, "Here, I'll have to tie it in place." He brought a knee-high sock into view as he leaned in to the bag, pressing it tightly against her lips and forcing the mass in her mouth even deeper down her throat before tying it off behind her head.

Her short respite from the first gag had not made this second gag any easier to bear, Hope soon discovered. She tried to moan that it was too tight, but barely any noise escaped her lips. This only seemed to confirm to Myles that he'd packed it correctly.

"Good!" he said, leaning back. "One last step, now."

She had hoped that there might be more fanfare, a few more moments of fresh air, but Myles, it seemed, had done all he needed to do. Without another word, the canvas above Hope began closing together as he zipped it shut; cutting off her view of the ceiling above until finally she was left alone in the dark, sweat-smelling bag. Tiny pinpricks of light could be seen between each zipper tooth, but not enough to illuminate the inside of the bag, and not enough to make out anything on the outside. She realized suddenly, looking at the zipper, that there was nothing to pull on the inside of it. There was only one hook on the outside of the bag, and there was no way to reach it if you were closed off within.

Once again, she was trapped, with only Myles to set her free.

Hope felt herself shift, and in a moment she was off the ground, her bound form pressing into the bottom of the bag. She moaned as the bag shuddered up and down. Myles was walking, it seemed. She heard the changing room door creak as it was pushed open, and Myles whispered from somewhere close to her bag:

"Don't worry," he said. "The only person who knows you're in there is me."


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TheBlindManTheBlindManover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you everyone for the lovely comments! To answer a specific point raised below without giving away too much of the plot: even though there appear to be discrepancies within the story from Hope's perspective here, they are resolved when we revert to Myles' perspective for the next section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
FUN STORY

LIKE YOUR STORY, KEEP GOING IT IS A FUN TAKE ON THE CHEERLEADER FANTASY

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good but plot issue

In the first one you established he had entered the women's locker room and then in the second the men's swim team used the locker room.

Now, a few possibilities exist that could make this work as written, first and least likely is the men's swim team made a mistake both before and after the practice and used the women's locker room which would be odd but maybe there was a problem that closed the men's but that also is odd that they were finishing up yet one guy wanted to use a new locker...

Second: the men's swim team is in on the con having been informed Hope is there and what her situation is which explains the 'delay'. Problem here is getting them to go along with it which skirts the edge of credibility for strangers wanting to participate in significant risk with little reward for unethical behavior.

Third: they weren't the men's swim team but were actually the fraternity guys that are helping out and are in on the con and had to take the time to get there which again explains the 'delay'. This is most likely given that with that list mentioned the fraternity is already at least marginally okay with the gray to dark ethical considerations inherent in this situation. Granted, she has slightly consented to some of this but good consent requires full disclosure and/or advance agreement of consensual nonconsensual activities. Given the supposed apparent lack of this discussion, that puts this situation in the darker levels. This is also most likely since the fraternity will likely be getting a naked cheerleader convinced to show up at the fraternity already agreeing to certain things and thus more likely to be willing to take the risk with some potential reward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is fantastic! Hope's naivete is adorable.

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