by pdgepdge
That was HOTTER THAN HELL...!! Wish that had happened when I played football!! I lost all shame because of events back then and would have enjoyed all this.
You are off to a great start with this series . There many ways to go from here of course . The foreshadowing you mentioned in part one seems rather hot to me . That being Carols own sons and her eventual interactions with them . Of course my imagination takes off and I can see that other mothers can get involved with their own sons ? Individually at home and in group instruction settings . This for the good of the neighborhood and the education of the sons . A ‘ Mother’s Watch Group ‘ so to speak . They could even be invited to the schools to practice on the students and athletes there . This could get incredibly intense and hot and I’m hoping it does. You have some solid skills as a writer and I am grateful for what you have created thus far . Keep it going please ! Looking for the next installment ....Mike