All Comments on '"O" Emma'

Not a bad effort. Although the story began in the present tense and changed to the past tense on page two. A bit off putting.

You can add more tags. More the tags, easier it will be for the readers to find it. You can even add the celeb tag: Emma Watson

I hadn't spotted the change of tense, I'll look out for it in the next episode. Thanks for your feedback.

Hi, just found this story - excellent! When are you going to post the next instalment?

Hi Coolgardie, I'm in the middle of the second chapter, but I seem to have hit a bit of a wall, hopefully I'll have it finished sometime soon.