All Comments on 'Oak'

Not a terrible story, but I have more criticisms and suggestions then I do praise. The idea is not a bad one and I'm a big fan of the upskirt, but it seemed a little far-fetched.

1. 50 feet is five stories. That's a long way up a tree where you could still be seen. 10 or 15 seems much more reasonable.

2. I'm not sure what you were doing with the articles. Sure, they're interesting, but not very sexy. I got distracted.

3. There wasn't much before the two started going at it. Give us a little more build-up and some dialogue.

Otherwise, not bad. Not bad at all. Keep on writing and keep on trying!