All Comments on 'Of Crystals and Watches Ch. 03'

Thoroughly entertaining, but all too short.

I love the unintended consequences and unforeseen problems. Now that our poor lad is stuck with five slaves of his own making. Will they be able to convince poor Master that they are worthy? Will they use the watch or crystal on him to help him understand his new position? Where did all this come from? Who was the doctor? How did the doctor find out Des was susceptible or already trained to some degree? What's the back story?

We definitely need another dozen chapters, at least, to work out all the details and see how the love-slaves continuously train themselves to be better for Master. That's gotta be the funniest/hottest part of it all.

Would like not to wait so long between chapters... Keep writing, please.

Oh what a tangled web we weave!!!