All Comments on 'Office Fantasy to Reality Ch. 02'

by mtnman2003

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
loved the backfiring

lol - love that she turned things around! Serves the male jerk right for thinking he could control a woman.

NefatiriNefatiriover 13 years ago
NIce!

I do like the flip she pulled. I do like my MMF scenes with a little gay thrown in. That said, good writer but really, does he have to talk about the exact dimensions of his cock all the time?

DamianShepDamianShepover 12 years ago

He should still be dominating her. It's like he's a different character in that second part. In the first one he's completely dominant and now he just follows.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Jim a Bully, not Dominant

Disagree with Damian that Jim is dominant. In the first chapter he was just a bully with greater physical strength, crude language and insults. Sara showed him who truly is "The Boss" of this relationship by using the shift of power -- Jim needed a contract more than his pride -- in her favor.

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