All Comments on 'Office Furniture'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Second person

It's not first person but second person and a very awkward read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Utter rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm not prepared to say second person never works. It's possible there's a second-person story out there somewhere that works. But I've never read one.

People will keep trying to write in second person though. Maybe every writer has to do it once to get it out of their system.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story quite a bit and look forward to seeing more of your smut!

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