All Comments on 'Office Games'

by hdufault7

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OdiouserOdiouserover 2 years ago

Welcome to the fold. We need all the new writers we can get. While this brief tale was not an inspiring boner maker, it was word perfect and portends great things from you when you get your wind up. Keep 'em coming.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Excellent first story. Very erotic. I can't wait to see what else you write in the future.

hdufault7hdufault7over 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you! My first story ever, but I definitely plan on writing more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep with this story. I'm into the idea. I would Make her like 6 or 8 years older and offer backstory. It would be good if they have like a sales job and they have to go to homes and they flirt infront of customers. Keep it up though

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