by WrightWrongs
That is fucking fantastic!! Soooooooo hot!! Please don’t make us wait too long for chapter 3
Terrific story. You're a very gifted writer. Now I'll have to read more of your work.
This is probably the best story I have ever read!
I can’t wait for the next chapter please x
Awesome story telling and so erotic. I really hope there is more chapters to come.
Wasn't expecting them to become a sub couple but that's good, I like the direction the story is headed
Well! Even better than the first part! I especially admire, and am turned on by, the way you bring Mrs Cale into the story. And you have so deftly developed so many lines for the series to follow in future. I do hope we hear of Mrs Cale’s experiences sucking her other lovers’ cocks.
This has become one of the hottest stories that I have read in quite some time. Simply amazing.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
It is, indeed, 'one of the hottest stories I have read',I do not think there is anymore to say.
This is an amazing story. A young woman like Jenny Anderson can't possibly exist, but if she did, she would have me on my knees ...
Thank you all for your kind comments and encouragement! I have more chapters in the works.
Just WOW. Your build up has been fantastic. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. So many possibilities for this series and spin-offs on Jenny’s past and future. I’ve read a lot of stories and this has to be one of the best. I like a story to fuck me with my own mind.
Damn damn damn. Thought it was hot after the first two chapters and had an idea where it was headed, but this scene was off the charts. Can’t wait to read more but am sure I’ll come back to this one again and again. Very talented writer that is pushing all my buttons.
Great. the description of Sharon/Mrs Cale's reactions is very effective.
I just hope you don't spoil it by introducing a Bull for cuckolding.
Interesting premise.
Needed more details. Breast/s involvement. Nipples. Maybe have him use his tongue on one of the women's assholes.
Maybe force his wife to edge his cock in front of Jenny before giving her instructions about how to edge him at home.
Four stars.