All Comments on 'Olivia in Vulmonia Ch. 43'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Yes please let her get out! Let her bring Thorsky and pounding and all of them to justice! Maybe Bogdan could even make it to America one day? Loving where this story is going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Brilliant chapter, love the suspense that you are building.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Shame Bogdan made a fool of himself with all that grovelling after throwing porridge over the judge. Too many words. I think Olivia says too many words sometimes aswell. I was beginning to think of Bogdan as a hero but after that tiraid of humiliating pleading I can't think of him so. All that was needed was "I'm so sorry sir, it was an accident", no need to mention the 'sticking fingers up Olivia's ass' incident at all, certainly no need to say it was a mistake. He also got the key by luck, not very heroic. Still very much enjoying this story though - R

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