All Comments on 'Olivia's College Life Ch. 01'

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TheJoker33TheJoker338 months ago

Great story, this has a lot of potential for expansion.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Has some good possibility, especially if there is some public nudity.

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_perv8 months ago

So the other (two?) girl got nothing but a mouthful of cum? Brilliant! 5*

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Hi and welcome to my profile! I'm new to writing stories, so feedback is always welcome so I can improve. Writing, reading, and imagining various scenarios is something I really find myself enjoying! The fact you are reading this must mean you're a cool person ^^