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ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 2 years ago

I enjoyed the first few stanzas, right up until about 1/3rd of the way through it. Then it just sort of bogged down for me. I struggled with it but eventually I finished it.

I'm well aware that you were suffering through migraine headaches and other illnesses during the time that you wrote this, so I'm going to attribute those reasons for this not being one of my favorites from you.

But don't feel bad about this unfavorable review, even Babe Ruth didn't hit a home run every single time that he was at the plate. I still prefer your work to most of the other authors on here and I'm proud to have you as a friend. I hope that you appreciate my honesty. I'm never going to blow smoke up your ass.

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