All Comments on 'On the Bus: Naughty Whispers'

That was very nicely done and I loved the twist at the end.

Mike

Nice ending!

That was a good start to the chain. Nothing like a bit of mystery!

DC:

I should known by now . . Thank You. Ronnie W.

Great start to what I know will be a wonderful Bus Ride. The twist certainly surprised me, great idea

Mmmm! This was a yummy little story with a fun little twist at the end! Very intrigued... great job. :)

With an interesting twist.

I'll have to keep reading this series to see where it goes.