All Comments on 'On The Way To The Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Enjoyed the story. The twist at the end was great. Maybe provide a little more detail along the way? I didn’t realize he was driving until he pulled over but now I realize I missed some details. What happens next?! They’re still on the way to the beach and now he has no swim suit. Perhaps he try’s on several pairs or they keep him naked?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great fun!

Exciting stuff

Gambit275Gambit275about 1 year ago

well he didn't screw his cousin

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