All Comments on 'Once It Gets Dark Ch. 02'

by MariadelaO

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calibigirlcalibigirl2 months ago

Oh definitely need more of this series!

MariadelaOMariadelaO2 months agoAuthor

This story is inspired by BoneMaiden‘s “Taken by the Sveril”.

I hope you enjoy!

DebbieWifeDebbieWife2 months ago

Oh my...loved it. More, Please.

NotAnonymousAnymoreNotAnonymousAnymore2 months ago

You ended this chapter right as I was getting excited, nice world building I guess, but how could you do such a thing to your audience!? 😢

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

love this so far!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I like this! Can’t wait for more. Keep up the good work

MariadelaOMariadelaO2 months agoAuthor

@NotAnonymousAnymore thank you so much for your comments and feedback! I’m sorry I left you hanging! I am working on chapter 3 right now and will submit it this weekend. I promise more sexy action in the next chapter! 😅

SilverBunk94SilverBunk94about 2 months ago

Keep the chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Funny enough I'm kind of more interested in the plot now than the porn LMAO. This is a really interesting story. Obviously rape is wrong but Ren shows a little potential for redemption.

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Ohmygosh i love it. How long do you plan to make the story?

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