by Garmo127
I love how this story has developed. A late comment, but surely in some of the MMF sessions, a DP could be considered?
I have just finished reading, over the course of a few days, all five chapters...
Brilliant work.
A few more chapters would be good please 😜
I like the possibilities offered by the swinging group..
For some reason this series went from fairly romantic foursome. Where people really carried for those they had sex with to just plain old fucking. Unfortunately, that really is the way such thing end up in real life. Too bad, both in real life and apparently also in fiction. The romance made the sex so much hotter.
I was really enjoying the first four chapters, but found the hot wife stuff turned me off. I liked the developing romances and friendships. I gave the early chapters five stars, but I’ll skip rating this one. You were honest in the description about the turn this story took, so I won’t down rate it just because I don’t care for the story. It was great up til this point.
I understand why some don't like the inclusion of other characters but, for me, it has improved things, thus I rated this 5 vs 4 for the previous chapters.
Keep up the good work. More please.
What an absolutely fabulous read, all 5 chapter so far have been wonderful. Can’t wait for more, especially with Jane in more detail with the others ladies and the addition of the gallery owner and his wife. Maybe a bit more bi fun between the guys as well.
Absolutely amazing series! Loved every bit of it. Great to see bi content, group sex, howiffing all in one story. Great job!
Glad this isn’t a cliff hanger where the author just stops writing. I usually look at the last chapter to see if that’s so. Would be nice if it continued but since this author has had no activity for 11 months I don’t expect it.
I really enjoyed writing my stories, but I'm afraid it became a chore watching each new story get 1 bombed so that they dropped off the radar. Check out my story "The Small Brown Box" The first 25 ratings were 5's, then it got 1 bombed twice and disappeared from sight. I don't know why people feel the need to do it, but all I wanted was to get honest feedback on my work and it was denied me.