All Comments on 'One Good Man (Complete)'

I'm sure that being married to a woman who keeps slaves in the (de)basement will be a load of laughs...

Seems to be more sci-fi than loving wives, doesn't it?

nor is there a happiness here.

sadness, sadly, is here.

oh well.

Why is this in non-consent? This is obviously sci-fi, it's a decent enough story but not the best keep writing though you have potential

See title.

The story starts out looking like another Loving Wives right-wing celebration of Traditional Morality. We meet the impossibly virtuous and considerate Alex, the perfect husband in every respect. We meet his even more virtuous, faithful wife Claire. Did I mention they're also perfect parents? Then into their blissful lives comes the lustful temptress and evil villainess, Amanda, who is determined to destroy all of Alex's wonderful life, for reasons we don't yet know.

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Then the author turns all of these Hallmark-Channel cliches on their heads and shows that the reader's understanding was entirely incorrect--and in fact everything is pretty much the opposite of the way it looked. Clever! I really enjoyed the wild inventiveness here. I also liked the fact that it's the "good" girl here (Amanda) who, when it comes to sex, is totally wild, uninhibited, bisexual, aggressive, and kinky. This story is loads of fun.