All Comments on 'One Horny Bitch'

This sounds like the set up for a much longer story you should write 😀

Dj's comment applies to most 750 word submissions -- very few seem complete. Enjoyable, but not terrific. I should probably try writing one to confirm (for myself) how difficult it is!

short and sweet. I liked it

750 is enough for a scene, or a short character study, or to set up a twist, and works well when it leaves the reader imagining what happens next. So, yes, there are definite opportunities for sequels.

Wrong category, lousy writing.

Yuk!

Maybe a bit short. The story..., not his cock.

Not a complete story, which is the reason I hate these 750 stories. Very rare that they are complete and well done.

I’m like the husband in your story, I love the idea of my wife being “ black fucked” and discovering she likes the thrill of it. I love the idea of her being dominated into submitting and him being experienced enough to play her. Coming home and hearing him in our bedroom pulling her deeper into the darkness.

Lol . Another perfect 750 .

Hope this crap dies an inglorious life right there 1

Thanks for the comments, y'all, sweet and sour.

10 Big Blazing Stars for writing this story of a naughty wife being Naughty for her Hubby. I hope he likes what he sees and rewards his horny naughty wife accordingly. Great writing, Great plot, Thanks for the effort. Buster2U

Terrific!

Better ending: Den held her head firmly in place and made her swallow every drop of his cum. He then pulled her to her feet. I'm going to take you home and breed you bitch." He said forcefully, completely uncaring of her reaction. He slung her over his shoulder, dumped her in the back of his SUV and drove to her house. He gathered her up again on his shoulder and just walked into their home, not even knocking. He just looked at sissy boi Jeff. "Upstairs master bedroom right now you little faggot." Jeff obeyed and in about two minutes he had been stripped, spanked and was on his knees sucking Den's big fat black cock for all he was worth. Den then took Jeff's horny cheating skank slut wife right in front of him before he then put Jeff on his hands and knees and made him his fuck toy as well. Wifey realized what a sissy cuck wimp Jeff was so she destroyed him emotionally and financially in the divorce. She then became one more of Den's empty headed white whores. She had three bi-racial children by him until he got tired of her and kicked her loose cunt and brats to the curb. She was one more stupid single white mom.

She now needs to give him her sweet honey pot and let his empty himself inside her!

She can't have children, so breeding would be a miracle.

Yummy! Love this short story.

Guess I am like many other White husbands who get aroused by the thought of watching my wife being fucked by a black cock that is in the 9 to 12 inches length and just under 3 inches thick so this was a good effort at our fantasy daydream. The only thing I'd change is to have the White husband watching his wife fondling and measuring the BBC before she takes every millimeter of it bareback and watch her Black lover fill her with his sperm.

One step at a time, lol

With my first wife, she loved to read Penthouse Forum stories. Naked on her stomach about black cocks. I told her one of these days I am going to invite a coworker who has done adult porn and make her enjoy both of us. She didn't object. We gave her , her first spit roast and dp. And yes women do enjoy the voerism and being stretched in more than 1 way.

Sounds wonderful.

Look for the pictures in Divorce Court

Strange way to search for new lovers. Has it worked for you?