All Comments on 'One Hot Night'

Hot, erotic, well done. A few technical errors but I was so taken by the subject matter that for once I didn't care! This wasn't about a scumbag cuchold or a cheating husband, not about a slut, mercenary wife. No sickies. Just a man and woman in love giving and taking. Fuck me! What a concept! Could this actually occur??!!

Personally, having had an experience very like this, I give this a 100% because I KNOW that tis does occur, but all too infrequently. :-(

Good work. We could use more like this.

A loving wife and husband story where they both explore a little extra in the marriage bed. No cheating, humiliation or degredation, just a little teasing and love. This is what a true loving wife story is about.

Now here's a very good example of an erotic evening a wife gives her husband.

She's a hot little devil!

I liked the different direction your story went. You might want to try an editor or proof-reader to clean up your writing the little it needs. Keep writing!

An excellent story of real love. She truly gifted her husband with herself.

Now this is a LOVING WIFE story. She didn't think of herself, she didn't go out and fuck some other guy.She thaught of her husband only and how she could make him happy and how to give him one hell of a birthday.I'm not married as of yet, but i hope i am lucky enough to marry a woman like her.By the way i also agree with the person that said that there should be two categories for wives.One LOVING WIVES and the other NON LOVING WIVES. Great story and keep u the good work.Thanks.