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by NotWise

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LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeabout 5 years ago
Rich and detailed, yet concise

I love the way you captured so much of life in that fortress in just three pages. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Intriguing story

As always, I savor the manner of NW's storytelling. (Written with a natural eloquence and a firm belief in what is his world.) You are a wonder at your craft. Enjoyed this immensely.

NotWiseNotWiseabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks to both of you!

Reader feedback has been hard to come by. I'm happy to hear that you both enjoyed the story.

vanmyers86vanmyers86almost 5 years ago
Compelling

This is the first story of yours I've read, and I liked it very much. You created vivid characters in a compelling situation, and you told their story in such a way that I couldn't wait to see what happened next. Well done!

lorrisuelorrisuealmost 5 years ago
excellent

very well done

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I'm a soon-to-be-retired planning consultant living in the US southwest. For those wondering about my "Unlikely Angels" story, Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on the story. I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it, but I removed it from Literotica after I made the "b...