by NotWise
This is the first story of yours I've read, and I liked it very much. You created vivid characters in a compelling situation, and you told their story in such a way that I couldn't wait to see what happened next. Well done!
Reader feedback has been hard to come by. I'm happy to hear that you both enjoyed the story.
As always, I savor the manner of NW's storytelling. (Written with a natural eloquence and a firm belief in what is his world.) You are a wonder at your craft. Enjoyed this immensely.
I love the way you captured so much of life in that fortress in just three pages. Nicely done.