All Comments on 'One Night in Mytilene'

I wrote this in third person, went back and tried to make it first person, decided that didn’t work and went back to return it to third person, and missed correcting some things. Sorry about that.

What can I say? Didn't expect that. Great vignette, RR. Thanks.

The surprise story made the whole story. To think that I almost didn't read it after reading the preface. I'm glad that I did. A 4* rating.

I wondered whether you'd changed person of the narration. Lots of "me" and "my" mixed in with the third person narrative, too. And things like "When she climax was over." Surprising in you, especially in such a short story.

You've been at this for how long now and this is the best you can do? I weep for those that call themselves writers, this was just terrible.