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by Jay1415

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent!

This is easily the best chapter (so far) in this story, with greater depth in all aspects, and with the most interesting and appealing character yet in this story. Great work, great writing, and,hopefully, there will be more to come from this author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The best chapter yet in this outstanding series. The plot is truly engaging, and is in no way bogged down by the marvellous romantic scenes, which add great depth to the over all story. Five stars.

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Hi all! Jay from New York here. All comments and criticism appreciated and encouraged. Please feel free to reach out with any and all Comments & Inquiries Happy reading!