All Comments on 'Online Chastity Ch. 10'

Great thanks!

Thank You Fict for this chapter. It is a wonderful holiday treat.

Still loving this story! Please add more chapters!

You're building such a nice world cant wait for it to come all together. Im Happy Tam is coming along.

Still cant get the predicament where Alex exposed himself to Tam out of my head its the hottest Thing I ever read and I fantasize about similar predicaments

Pet 3… intriguing. Love your story

I have a feeling I am going to be desperately sorry when this story (novella? novel?) finally ends.

Enticing setup. I fear for your sake, fict, you may be boxing yourself in dramatically speaking. Drama = conflict, change, character growth. Having submitted so completely, how much room have you left Alex & Tam to grow? Maybe to see them doubt themselves or resist some new challenge - which has been erotically handled to this point, true - but I fear that would get repetitive and lose its appeal, now that Sam's control is complete.

And Sam... I wonder if she isn't a bit too "perfect." Perfectly self-assured, unwavering in her agenda, expert in her techniques. Does she have any flaws, doubts, anything new she has to learn about *herself? I said it before, her own POV scenes (which is fact were present early on, but have dropped out) reveal little or nothing of her internal state.

...Just a little constructive criticism to an inspired, able pen, whose work I am enjoying very much. This story has been a consistent 5/Fave from me. I just worry that what is to follow may get stale if there isn't a ramp-up of emotional tension to go with the ramp-up of setting and stakes.

Thanks, fict, and Bravo ~PM.

has this author given up doesnt seem to have been any updates on there stories any of them for a long time

The first 9 chapters of this story were incredibly eroitc. This chapter sets the tone for what is to come. The other is a very talented writer, and I'm enjoying this immensely. Thank you for this.

This is a great story that leaves me wanting MORE!