All Comments on 'Online Friend Ch. 01'

That was highly erotic!!! The passionhad me hard!!!. I loved it.

*sighs* I wrote this on a dare. A friend on another writing site timed me for 30 minutes to see if I could come up with a sex story. This is very lacking of organization and detail... I have no idea why anyone likes it.

Your writing really grabs me... I felt as if I was there with you and taking the place of Greg. I wanted you so badly as I worked through your story...

Well blue rose, if you can write a story as good as this in under 30 minutes you must have a fine dirty mind and a talent for writing good pornography. So please give us more. You have made a great start.

All I can say is you had me from the start, that was a hot story. Please keep writing!