All Comments on 'Only Time Ch. 02'

WW have you no mercy, my heart is already stressed. Seriously something needs to fix those Swamp Frogs into changing their wayward behaviours. And what if any updates about Sen. Russell's murder.

Keep up the great storytelling

Laura is not in the bed and Iron Crowbar is the Officer on post. Probably Lt Commander,

supposedly sleeping. One live conspirator in the bag.

This is a good one. I have a hard time waiting for new installments. Get 'em posted! Thanks for sharing...........

You usually have us on the edge of our seats but this is a whole 'nother level! Great second chapter. I can't wait for the next!

The perp is being set up. Two of the I/C officer's would not be asleep, especially not while guarding I/C's wife. So the shots fired obviously did not hit Laura. Question is does the perp survive, or commit suicide by some drug before the I/C can get any information. Second, and perhaps more importantly, what about the electronics gave I/C the clue that Laura was in danger. That I am missing.

Well done WW

This undoubtedly is domestic swamp frog terrorist behavior. All to tidy for the results so far and the control they are tryo g to keep over this event.

Great writing as always!

The next chapter of the story has been submitted and hopefully will be published soon.

Anonymous/Two Officers - that'll be explained more in the upcoming chapters...

was the crowbar there in time?

The two officers were pretending to be asleep on orders of the IC.

Is it time for the whirleybat to take a trip to DC to take out more Swamp Frogs?

Anonymous and WifeWatchman;

I may be wrong, my guess is the explosion was actually from some hospital electrical equipment. The truck’s exploded upward, the perps were fried in a fire due to the oxygen equipment leaking. I’ll bet the officers were drugged but Laura has been moved. Just my two cents. This is another awesome story!!! - Phil

Of course Laura was moved and the perp was clocked and taken to a secret room to be interrogated.

My guess is the perp is from that Navy S.E.A.L. Unit that has popped up during the various series of stories, since the Nuclear Bomb incident.

Talk about agents of the week minds, and this the greatest miss of the centaury. Brilliant post yet again WW and am awaiting the next instalment. Thank you 5+* again. Iceman

My guess is the blast came from fed sponsored drone or pre set charges already there, and the truck was just a decoy to throw the locals off the real culprits.

keep allowing the oppos, too many chances to win, its time to power up with a kangaroo court using the Big 3...Judge,Jury & Executioner, thinning their ranks, forcing them to replenish. TK U MLJ LV NV

*****This is one of the best series chapters I have enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.