All Comments on 'Open Your Mouth'

Hot!

Incredibly hot. Looking forward to a potential sequel.

Oh yes please more from you 😳🥺

Your formatting can be a little distracting, where you have a sentence cut off into a new paragraph before it's finished, and you spelled lose as loose, and picnic is spelled wrong, and hyphenated in another instance. You also repeat words in the same sentence sometimes such as the line about Avery's little cock. But these issues are all very minor, just maybe something you want to look out for next time.

Your story was otherwise insanely hot, humiliating, and well written. I love the strong use of degrading language, the slurs, the name-calling, the overly dominant top, and of course the coercion and forced breeding. This story ticked all the boxes for me, so thanks so much for sharing.

Really looking forward to read more from you!

Written by a new to the life. Accurate surely but strangely boring.

fantastic, walks the line between sexy degrading and dysphoria-inducing degrading very well, by which i mean, i kept worrying there would be something that would set me off in the bad way, but whenever i got close enough to thinking the "salesman" might just be thinking of the main character as a girl, he'd get called some sort of masculine name. Anyway, a well done story, very hot

I think he'll make a wonderful father when he has the baby. Maybe he should be made a daddy many more times...

Made my ftm pussy wet and ready for breeding!

Oh my..I have such strong emotions from this….

…intense arousal!

…stunned by the abuse!

Did I mention how aroused I am?

ftm here. so fucking hot. it'd be nice for a revenge plotline where he records the non-consent takes his money and has him arrested the next time he shows up. just a thought, you do you

I cum to this so goddamn much thank you kind soul

I’m nonbinary and I have a massive fear of pregnancy and dysphoria about my characteristics, and this story like others help me.. cope with all that. Breeding kink doesn't diminish how someone is trans and doesn’t make me want to get pregnant, but it IS hot anyway. Thank you OP 🥹

Incredible

FTM here.

Love the photographs/vid idea

Super delicious

Wonderful! I love the little details like Avery looking at the man's wedding ring.