by GrumpyGamby
this is so charged. you do a great job putting the reader right in the moment, feeling just what your characters are going through.
thank you looking forward to the next installment
you have got me tied up into this story but i don't want this sadness. why does he have to have this illness? very strong and powerful. i will be checking back often.
You have handled a very difficult subject beautifully, with sensitivity. I know I wouldn't even try to go where you have gone with this.
I don't think there is anything other than to say thank you.
bob
It is very well done and the emotions are real. The reader can understand and identify with the characters, especially the husband. Very good!