All Comments on 'Oral Cravings'

Well done, Siren. See you in the lab.

What? This is like a kinky Dr Seuss. Five stars.

How does one become a siren? I want that power. Please write more.

Nice story. I’m also into seduction. Is Siren into black men?

You've asked how one becomes a siren. My next story shares a taste of how it happened for a certain woman.

Of course, Venomous. I sense a raging ocean approaching in the distance.

wowsers!!! fabulous !!!

Wow, it rhymes too. Very hot and descriptive.

How cute this is... writing about your pen pal on Literotica. Do the two of you volley back and forth I wonder? So, I love the imagery. This is a pretty short piece for this site, but I prefer short pieces. Sirens, of course, are ministers of beauty and death... not to be taken lightly. I don't sense the sinister qualities I'd expect, but then, Bunny is not a sailor or even a man. Who is to say that sirens don't prefer to kill and eat men while they only lick their women?

An enjoyable read

Thank you, DampKitten. I think we will see Bunny again soon, as well as another. There are no deaths in the planning, but the following story grows more insidious.

thru the door ... and out into the universe of yet more escapades !

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take care, stay safe levi coldwater

oh ... aspiring writer ....

... write something every day !

... find a writer's group ( regardless of genre ) -- join it

... find a really good Beta Reader !

... find Elmore Leonard's Ten Rules For Writing ... take them to heart!

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we expect to see more of your stuff --- on a regular basis !

Thank you, Tail_Gunner. The door will be opening soon. xoxo