All Comments on 'Organism X Ch. 11'

Big fan of this story. It would be really helpful if each chapter had a brief recap of who all the characters are though, as the cast has become quite large and it can be difficult to keep who’s who straight in one’s head in the time between chapters. Keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Glad you like the story! With the length and cast of the story, it’s clear it’s getting a bit unwieldy, so I’ll try to give an overview of the main players before the start of the next chapter. I’ll also make a note to give a little more in text explanation for who the characters are and their background when they appear.

Really glad we're getting more of this, fingers crossed you keep churning these out at the pace you've been going lately!

Really like the concepts of dread, and the longing for normality your bringing into the story. Brings in an element of realism that makes sense, and is compelling.

Moar

when will there be more ???? so good !!!

Is this the end of the story?

This is epic! But I feel like the hero’s never have a real advantage it always the villains that have the upper hand...so I was wonder if the evil girls had John a male...how about someone for Jessie’s crew a college student a broken man looking for revenge for the death of his little brother a victim of what going on, a violent man with a good heart a worthy foe to face against the infected every time he on screen you know shit going down that sense of dread on the other side of the stage... but it just an idea

Please please keep going! I love the story!

PLEASE PLEASE keep going! The tension you create and the delicious sense of submission on the characters fall is marvelous!

@northmiestet thank you!!! Don’t worry, I have plans to finish the series. Currently working to finish my other series, mummified remains, then finishing Organism X along with a few other projects.

I hope the author is ok and this series will continue