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"Damn!" Ira swore. Seeing Lucifer shake her head he needed to choose his words wisely. "I was going to have them protect mom and Bridgett but if they can't summon weapons it will be useless," he said creasing his brow, trying to think of something he could do to protect his family.
Unbeknownst to all of them, far away, a dark witch was trying to harness a power she would never be strong enough to control.
to be continued...
Afterword: I hope everyone enjoyed the chapter, I will have the next one out as soon as I can.
Just so you know, Jenny, Tiffany, Calista and Chloe were fun people to add for a short time while Amy tried to help them over the trauma of Paul. Chances are they won't appear very much in the future as I have no plans to make them primary characters in the story.
- COMMENTS
RanDog025about 1 year agoI think it great that one of my favorite Authors, Soul71 gives you his blessing to use the character in one of my favorite series and was hoping to read a Chapter 19 in the future but would settle for anything he writes. Very enjoyable story so far. Enough to earn 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Also a big ass thank you!
Kahunabobover 1 year agoJust stumbled across this story arc set in Soul's PSF universe today. It's a fun read, I think both your writing styles compliment each other. Looking forward to reading the next chapters.
Had to giggle (manly, of course) a couple of times at you running with Soul's trademark of mentioning breast sizes every chance they can, but in your case with the oversized dick sizes John and Jeff carry around. Very precise measurements ;)
If you're open for some feedback even though the story is already a couple of years old...
- I think you, or at least your characters Amy & Laura are a bit to blasé about being date raped or escaping date rape. Feels that when they talk about it, it's almost in the same tone as someone asking if they want cream and sugar in their coffee.
- The stable of characters is being expanded on pretty quickly. Read the disclaimer at the end of the story, but it's a lot of cast members and sometimes it's hard to keep track of who's who.
- I'd have expected the different families to be slightly more hesitant to start having playing around with their family members. The way they immediately jump at the chance to have a go at each other is a bit of porn logic suspense of disbelief. Though probably fitting, since it's a story set in the 'Porn Star Family' universe...
Iceman79over 3 years agoI like the story but its kinda weird how they keep saying they fuck there children but John never fucked Laura like ever
mammoetabout 4 years agountil that fantasy stuf came into the story i hope ch3 is less confusing or you will lose another reader.
