All Comments on 'Our First Time by the Open Fire'

Another thing: what the heck is first time here? This category would be inundated if first time

- in the car

- under the apple tree

- on the balcony

....

would be published in first time category.

Writing with I/you is boring. Repitious sentence structure.

Give people names.

A great effort, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your tale.