All Comments on 'Our Second MFM'

Your writing would be more readable if you spelled out words instead of using digits. “threesome,” “foursome,” “number two”

I've read #1 and #2 and as an almost 80 year old, I'm jealous of all their energy and inhibitions. Bravo on this story, it's a solid 5 stars.

Very enjoyable story. I was sure the guys would at least try sucking on each other. I think that is a natural curiosity as you get older.

Please add at least one more chapter. Corrine on sex swing with legs spread so wide it appeared she was doing the splits. Wow. Get Charlotte up there too.

Hey wxyz, you are leaving us hanging. I’m 75 and loved your story. Please give us another chapter with these characters.